Rewrite of same paper on a midsummer nights dream.

-In second paragraph, Theseus is not yet married to Hippolyta, they plan to get married

-Hernia should be “Hermia” throughout the paper as that is her correct name

-Thesis is a bit too general, could be a little more focused and set up more for argument

-Conclusion should tie more back to the thesis

-Could use a bit more textual evidence to support arguments

The paper was good but summarized a bit too much. It should be focused more on exploring the ideas in depth rather than summarizing them throughout the paper. There were also a few inaccuracies of information in the play.